(Poem) Collab

What defines our bounds and rules?
And who defines our domains?
Throw our hands and act like fools–
Or drag the chains that remain?
Show them all the careless dance,
And bring them to unchallenged grace.
Make it all more than happenstance;
Embrace the resonance of this place.

What defines our dreams and desires?
And who defines our path?
If only we could grasph the fires
Without the burn of flames’ sure wrath.
Display your wings as if you could fly
But on the way down, you better be sure
Take in the laughing, happy people walking by
All the things you wish you were.

What if we define our limits?
What if our hands are our chains?
Is it the mirrored face that inhibits?
Think these thoughts in the moments that remain.
Tell of the life without inhibitions,
And the person you had been before
Let go of the ghosts that make your decisions
So you can be someone even more.

The whispers of the past enrapt
And you feel sickly at ease
But all you end up, is trapped
With the empty unwarmth of a melancholy breeze.

(Prompt) I learned–didn’t I?

The Time Is Now (from the awesome website Poets and Writers, https://www.pw.org ) offers free prompts every Tuesday, to help get your creative juices flowing or to challenge you to try something different.  So, every Tuesday we will be using their prompts to experiment and expand and have a little fun!  Feel free to join us every Tuesday, we’ll be doing the previous week’s prompt to let everyone have a chance to write something.  Leave a comment with your poem and you may be featured!  Remember to like and subscribe for more poetry prompts!

Prompt from 7/17:  Wholesome.

Think of something in your life that has been either physically or figuratively broken, fragmented, or made distant, and write a poem that attempts to restore its wholeness. How might you use the ideas of rejoining parts, searching for new openings, or creating connections for empathy, to write a poem that begins to make what is broken whole?

Not sure how
Somehow in my academic folly
A cursor became scary
And I thought myself a fraud.

Who is this trespasser
With her books and statistics
Are they looking down at me
Or am I supposed to step up.

They told me to break the wall
That they put in front of me
If it wasn’t hard, everyone
Would do it, right?

Not sure if I made the best choice
But here I am halfway up
And with every word I write
A brick falls down.

Surreptitiously, I rebel
Against the mantra
“All you are is this”
To keep my sanity,, heal my hurt.

I learned
I am not perfect
I am not the smartest in the room
That no reinforcements were coming.

I learned
I am my own enemy
I am capable
That it’s one step at a time.

Armed with the truth
The scientist is king
Armed with my truth
I can push forward.

Knocking down
Building up
One day the data will make sense
One day it will be significant.

Next week’s prompt:  Love Scientifically

(Writing 101) 5 tips for better Creative Writing OR Technical Writing

So you’re someone who’s a little bit more artsy, love to express yourself in sonnets and imagery but have a harder time with technical writing?  Or maybe you’re great at writing facts, non-fiction, and being very concise but you have a harder time with creative writing?

Don’t worry, whether you’re one or the other–you’re in luck.  Here are 5 tips that might help get you through your thesis or get your creative juices flowing.  And always remember: writing is a skill.  Even if you grew up writing acrostic poems while the rest of your class were deciding between “I love you, Mom” and “I ❤ U” (true story), it is still a skill.  It needs to be honed, practiced, and critiqued before it gets better.  So don’t worry if you’re not the next poet laureate or David Sedaris (I love you).

1.  Get familiar with what you’re trying to write.

Read.  Read.  Read.  Read.  Read.  Read until your eyes bleed.  Okay, maybe not that far.  But the point is, read the kind of writing you’re trying to emulate.  As they say, imitation is the best form of flattery, so you’ll learn some things or see some things that you might want to borrow and make your own.  Read lots of theses or dissertations or scientific articles.  You’ll learn about the kind of language they use.  You’ll start to discover a basic template that you can use.  If you’re trying to write creatively, check out well-known authors and unpublished, random works.  There are so many great creative minds out there that have zero ambition to publish, but their words can be just as inspirational.

2.  Your first draft is going to be sh*tty. 

Even if you’re David Sedaris, your first draft is not going to be Shakespeare.  You have to get over that real quick.  Hell, maybe even your second draft.  Or your third.  But slowly it will start to take shape, and you’ll start to see it take a form very close to where you want it to be.  So, the point is: just get something on the page.  You might just word vomit your thoughts or ideas, or you might brainstorm bullet points or you might make a Venn diagram.  Whatever works for you.  The scariest part of any work is just starting.  You got this!

3.  Let people read it–but remember you’re the author.

And be prepared to get red marks and criticism about a section of your writing that you thought was brilliant and genius.  It always helps to have more than one set of eyes read your work.  They might spot something that you miss, or they might have some words of wisdom that gives you a lightbulb.  But always remember: you are the writer.  And you have what I like to call…the “writer’s veto.”  Meaning, you don’t have to take all their advice, you can veto anything.  It’s your work.  You take everything with a grain of salt.  If you have an editor, then it probably behooves you to listen to what they say very seriously, but ultimately, it’s your choice.  Maybe there’s something you want to fight for because of Reason X.  Who knows.  If you have an advisor, then yeah, maybe it’s a good idea to approve all their edits because if you don’t you’ll be stuck in grad school forever and spend your nights crying alone in the dark staring at a blinking cursor wondering why “via” sounds dated.  But again, if you have really strong feelings about something, it’s still up to you, and eventually they’ll back off.

4.  Focus on your strengths.

If you’re more technical or more creative…own it.  That’s what you’re better at.  That’s great.  Some people are crappy at both, you should be happy.  It doesn’t mean you shouldn’t try to improve the skills you’re weakest at, but you should use the tools you have right now.  If you can’t write prose in your thesis, that’s understandable, but you’ll probably have a fun time using your creative brain by looking at a thesaurus to find the best words.  Because using the word “utilize” a million times is so boring, am I right??  Or maybe you’re having a hard time letting loose for a creative piece, but you’re really good at making outlines or planning.  You can gather the gist of what you’re trying to write, and then practice word vomiting on the page.  Go back to Tip 2, just write something down.

5.  Take a break.

When we focus so much on trying to do something, sometimes we can become resentful of the task.  This can be particularly bad if you’re trying to write a thesis and you’re gathering more and more debt the longer you stay in your program and would rather pluck all the hairs on your body with a tweezer than stare at your dissertation.  In other words, take a break.  Close your laptop.  Stop thinking about it.  Do something else.  When you’re ready to come back to it, do your best to re-frame the way you view it.  Maybe you find it boring or overwhelming or too difficult or not good enough.  Find something positive about it.  Or make your goal smaller.  Or accept that that’s how you feel about it but focus on what you can do to get it done.  Focus on what you’ll get when you get it done.  Like having everyone stop asking you when you’ll finally graduate because if you hear it One. More. Time.  You can do it!  And if you have the luxury of going back to it later…try that too  If you’re not finding joy or purpose in it, try something else.

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